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Elements of Writing

The following information is quoted from Workbook for Writers, Emily Gordon & Lynn Troyka, Simon and Schuster, 1987.

Writing is a way of communicating a message to a reader for a purpose. The purpose of writing is to provide information for and persuade a reader.

Informative Writing:
Informative writing (also known as expository writing) seeks to give information and, when necessary, to explain it. The major focus of informative writing is on the subject being discussed. Informative writing includes reports of observations, ideas, scientific data, facts, and statistics found in textbooks, encyclopedias, technical and business reports, nonfiction books, newspapers, and magazines.

Persuasive Writing:
Persuasive writing (also known as argumentative writing) seeks to convince the reader about a matter of opinion. The major focus of persuasive writing is the reader whom the writer wants to influence. Persuasive writing seeks to change the reader's mind. Examples of persuasive writing include editorials, letters to the editor, reviews, sermons, business or research proposals, opinion essays in magazines, and books that argue a point of view.

Understanding the Writing Process:
Planning......gather ideas and think about a focus.
Shaping.......consider ways to organize your material.
Drafting......write your ideas in sentences and paragraphs.
Revising......evaluate your draft and rewrite it by adding, deleting, changing, moving and often totally rewriting material.
Editing.......check the technical correctness of your grammar, spelling, punctuation, and mechanics.
Proofreading......read your final copy for typing errors or handwriting legibility.

Think about Writing:
As you think through and gather ideas for your topic, your task is to establish a focus, or a point of view, about the topic, and support for that focus. You also need to think about the purpose for your writing and the audience.

Know How to Select a Topic on Your Own:
Some instructors will ask you to write on whatever topic you wish. In such situations, you need to select a topic that is suitable for informative or persuasive writing in college, one that reflects your ability to think through ideas. You need to demonstrate that you can use specific, concrete details to support what you want to say. Be especially careful not to choose a topic that is too narrow, or you will not have enough to say. However, do not focus on more than one major theme.

Know How to Narrow an Assigned Topic:
When you choose or are assigned a topic that is very broad, you have to narrow the subject. To do this, you must think of different areas within the subject until you come to one that seems workable for an essay. A suitably narrowed topic will enable you to move back and forth between general statements and specific details.

Know How to Keep an Idea Book and Write in a Journal:
Many writers carry an idea book--a small notebook--with them at all times so they can jot down ideas that spring to mind. A journal, like an idea book, is a record of your ideas, but it is built from daily sessions of writing. In your journal you can write about your opinions, beliefs, family, friends, or anything else you wish. The content and tone can be as personal and informal as you wish. Nevertheless, a journal is not a diary for merely listing things done during the day. It is a book for you to fill with ideas you wish to ponder.

Know How to Use Freewriting:
Freewriting means writing down whatever comes into your mind without stopping to worry about whether the idea is good or the spelling is correct. You do nothing to interrupt the flow.

Know How to Use Brainstorming:
Brainstorming refers to making a list of all the ideas that come to mind associated with a topic. The ideas can be listed as words, phrases, or complete sentences. List making, like freewriting, produces its best results when you let your mind range freely, generating quantities of ideas before analyzing them. Brainstorming is done in two steps. First, make your list. Then go back and try to find patterns in the list and ways to group the ideas into categories. Set aside any items that do not fit into groups. The groups with the most items are likely to reflect the ideas that you can write about most successfully.

Know How to Use Mapping:
Mapping is much like brainstorming, but it is more visual. When you map, start with your subject circled in the middle of a sheet of unlined paper. Next draw a line radiating out from the center and name a major division of your subject. Circle it, and from that circle move out to further subdivisions. Keep associating to further ideas and to details related to them. When you finish with one major division of your subject, go back to the center and start again with another major division. As you go along, add anything that occurs to you for any section of the map. Continue the process until you run out of ideas.

Know How to Group Ideas:
Effective writing includes both general statements and specific details. In informative and persuasive writing, general statements must be developed with facts, reasons, examples, and illustrations. To group ideas, review the material you accumulated while gathering ideas. Look for general ideas and group them under less general topics. If you find your notes contain only general ideas or very specific details, return to gathering techniques to supply what you need.

Order Ideas:
Shaping ideas for writing also means ordering them into a logical structure. You need to decide what should come first, second, and so on. Within the essay, and within individual body paragraphs, you can order ideas in various ways. The most common organizational strategies are generalization to specifics, climactic order, chronological order, and spatial order.

Determine your Role and Tone:
As an adult writing to an adult audience, you are expected to sound reasonable. Your stance is reflected in your tone--what you say and how you say it. Tone can be broadly described as informal or formal; it is informal in journals and freewriting. As you move from writing for the private you to writing for an audience, you are expected to move toward a more formal tone. Most audiences expect a tone midway between informal and highly informal. Your tone should take into account the topic, purpose, and audience.

Draft a Thesis Statement:
A thesis statement is the central theme of an essay. Because it prepares your reader for what you will discuss, the thesis statement must accurately reflect the content of the essay. Here is a list of basic requirements for a thesis statement.
1. It states the essay's main idea--central point you are making to the readers.
2. It reflects the essay's purpose--either to give your readers information or to persuade your readers to agree with you.
3. It includes a focus--your assertion that conveys your point of view.
4. It may briefly state the major subdivisions of the essay's topic.
EXAMPLE: Adopted children should be able to find out about their birth-parents for psychological, medical, and moral reasons.